Friday, 12 October 2007

blip.

The cross is hanging from the spade.
The predictable words have been prayed.
Dust turns light into visible air,
Lilies braided in her hair,
Now that all present are aware,

that Death has kissed the maid.

Comments:
that kind of makes me feel a little odd inside...
 
Good blip. A little creepy maybe, but still good.

I wonder if dust turns light into visible air or if it is the light that turns the dust into visible air.

I'd like to see this expanded into more than just a blip. It has its own legs already.
 
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